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[Auburn]

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[wolf]

hmmmmmm

Edit: Modifying to add more text just to see
what more text looks like on a post with no avatar in it.

I would try it on my own except it's long as it is so writing
a lot wouldn't really increase the size of it.

[Auburn]

Smoke...
Edit: Deleted the nonsense.

[test]

Oh christ, that's a whole lot of nonsense!
You could have at least pretended to care yknow. ;P Aw well, nobody else's gonna see this site anyhow, so it's all good, right? um...

Or at least, that's what i hope... such thoughts have failed me in the past ^^; so I'm not sure.

[Auburn]

So this is for the bare bones, the outline of the genisis story as I've come to rearrange it now. I will probably change and add things soon, but as it stands here's what I have:

CHAPTER I

• Lin and F1 are introduced as long time childhood friends who spend much time in a little hideaway in the forest next to their village, Jara.
  
  
• F1 is a trap-maker and apprentice hunter. Lin brings him the last remaining scraps for the completion of his latest trap. Foreshadowings for an adventure scene tomorrow.
  
  
• Main purpose of chapter is to emphasize the type of friendship they share and create a home atmosphere in the reader's mind. Chapter will be descriptive in it's scenery and atmosphere.
  

CHAPTER II

• Radiant sunrise is described in detail, as well as the world - giving the reader more background into the era of the story. Transitions down to the characters.
  
  
• F1 wakes up, excited, and runs down to Lin who calms him down. They eat, chat a little about the village [more info to the reader].
  
  
• After eating they set up the new trap F1 developed, specifically for catching Montanoceratops (a dinosaur). Once set, they see one approaching. But then right as it's about to fall into a trap, a predator dinosaur comes and attacks it!
  
  
• Then by some elaborate set of cirumstance I've yet to decide on, Lin is the one who accidentally ends up getting stuck in the trap, and in plain sight for the predator dinosaur who starts to run toward her and devour her!
  
  
• Then somehow, but sheer luck F1 manages to slice a large gash right on the middle of his face, and it runs away in much pain.
  

CHAPTER III

• Coming back to the hideout, Lin is petrified and pale, and sits by the fire tyring to easer her nerves.
  
  
• Then F1 notices there's only two fish left but they only had 2 of the 5 for breakfast. He tracks/sniffs down the smell a little ways into the bushes and finds Deliph there holding the fish ("Thief!") with a guilty look on her face - offering it back apologetically. ( >,< ). This scene is more or less humorous and a type of "release" from the previous dramatic scene.
  
  
• Deliph then scurries away a little and hides behind another tree.. peeking out one eye. Her stomach grumbles so strong F1 can hear it from that distance, and she shyly ducks back behind the tree. F1 laughs, and tells her to come on by, and so tentatively Deliph joins them by the fire.
  
  
• Lin notices Deliph's long long hair and the patterns/designs on her clothes which covered nearly all her skin -- trademarks of a Sethite -- so she tosses Deliph a fruit "here catch". She catches it, thanks her for it but says she doesn't like fruits much. (this scene will become important in the future).
  
  "So you're a sethite" Lin then asks bluntly. Deliph admits and tells the story of how she was kidnapped/stolen from her village and next just remembers waking up in this strange forest. F1 and Lin promise to help her find her way back home. (p.s. that's a long way away from Jara)
  
  
• They head into the village and go to F1's place, which is his big brother's house. They explain the situation, and the big brother F1B, says he might be able to help them out but it'd take him a week or so to get ready for such a long journey. Deliph accepts this with much thanks.

CHAPTER ?? - ??

• The chapter that follows is the time period leading up to that trip. During this time, I'll intruduce other village kids that own and ride their own dinosaurs, though rather small compared to the one F1 was trying to capture. Deliph tags along as the boys battle their dinosaurs and race them agaisnt obstacles, etc.
  
  
• One dinosaur, a rather tame type, approaches Deliph kindly and is befriended. Deliph ends up learing how to ride it and names it. Feeds it. etc.
  
  
• F1 finally traps that dionsaur he was after, and since it's qute big, can also ride with Lin on top of it. And so when the time finally comes to leave, the three of them travel around on their dinosaurs - F1B carring a carriage of supplies on a large Ox type animal. F1's dinosaur rival and friend also tags along, making five of them on the journey.